Arlo Parsons Week # 38

 This is the story of a Banana and Monkey. The name of the Banana was Fred and the name of the Monkey was Bigfoot.

One day while Fred was sitting with some other bananas in the forest a gigantic, hairy, beast, more than ten times the size of him came along and picked him up. His name was Bigfoot.

“No, Fred screamed in confusion”. What is happening? “Yay, I got a ripe one,'' Bigfoot said. “I am trying to hold on,’ he shouted to his other monkey friends. This banana is tricky to get because he’s trying to get away!

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  1. Fern (100WC)July 8, 2021 at 9:44 AM


    Hi Arlo! I love how you wrote Fred's point of view as a banana, seeing Bigfoot approach. The opening line is also really catchy. The ending certainly makes me hope Fred makes it out of there alright.

    Great work and keep writing!

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