#39 - …I just had to see what was inside…Noah M

 It was a regular old day sitting when I heard a knock on the door. I went to go check what it was but when I got there nobody was there. I looked down and by my feet was a black box with the letters SDHA on it. I picked it up and put it inside. It said to not open it but I couldn't help it, I had to see what was inside. When I opened the box it looked like nothing was in it but then my eyes caught a glimpse of something, something with beady yellow eyes...

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  1. Fern (100WC)July 12, 2021 at 9:00 AM

    Hi Noah! This sounds like the beginning of either a horror story or an interesting mystery, depending on who, or what the beady yellow eyes belong to. I like the detail with which you describe the narrator's thoughts and actions. It really helped build the suspense.

    Great work and keep writing!

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