#39 Joe I just had to see what was inside...

 Once with my family we were going on a hike in the mountains then suddenly the ground fell from beneath our feet. We fell into something that looked like an old deserted coal mine. We wandered around for a bit seeing if we could find an exit then started walking down a long steep corridor. We hit a dead end; out of the corner of my eye I saw an old chest - I just had to see what was inside - it was filled with hundreds of bits of coal. 3 days later we got rescued.

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  1. Fern (100WC)July 12, 2021 at 9:07 AM

    Hi Joe! I wonder why the coal was left behind in the chest. Did the miners forget about it after storing it there? I like the descriptions of the inside of the coal mine. I could picture the eerie underground location pretty vividly reading this.

    Great work and keep writing!

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